tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230532155700614110.post3210496974780473828..comments2012-10-29T07:30:27.763-07:00Comments on One Hot Mess: Jared: Chapter 1Melaniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09611066065711279881noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230532155700614110.post-82193042971261253732010-07-01T07:15:19.822-07:002010-07-01T07:15:19.822-07:00There's more coming. I got 3 chapters before I...There's more coming. I got 3 chapters before I tapped out. I just couldn't see posting 3 chapters as one neverending post. It makes me want to sing the Sherrie Lewis song..."This is the post that never ends, yes it goes on and on my friend." I do not want that stuck in my head all day! I've got the other two chapters scheduled for today. Mental picture is where I get stuck sometimes, because really this is a movie in my head that I'm really just trying to describe for everyone else.Melaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09611066065711279881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230532155700614110.post-74164559860754391302010-07-01T06:15:27.468-07:002010-07-01T06:15:27.468-07:00Good start. Great, in fact, when I stop to think a...Good start. Great, in fact, when I stop to think about it more. You've got a talent for describing the scene to form a mental picture. What kind of story do you plan on writing around it?Daddy Hawkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01386749814126280114noreply@blogger.com